LO3: These are the new clean boards created incoporating the feed back given at christmas exploring the new charcters, character arch and story arch.
LO7: I feel the story is now a lot stronger espeically due to how the charters are placed within the narrative. When the narrative was first taken into space the characters stayed the same as before so were not fitting in the enviroment well. Now the charatcers are being created with the enviroment adn are even part of it is some cases.
The fish are also an intersting addition which I feel enrich the story and give the girl character a way of entering the enviroment and introduce her to the other main character.
L01: I do have a point of feed back for myself before I show it to anyone else for feedback: it takes to long to intoduce the creature character- which I have now called Draco. i have yet to take these boards into animatic stage but i am worried that too much of the story will be leading up to the main moment but, due to time constraints, the character will not have a long time to explore that moment before having to conclude the story.
LO7: I feel the story is now a lot stronger espeically due to how the charters are placed within the narrative. When the narrative was first taken into space the characters stayed the same as before so were not fitting in the enviroment well. Now the charatcers are being created with the enviroment adn are even part of it is some cases.
The fish are also an intersting addition which I feel enrich the story and give the girl character a way of entering the enviroment and introduce her to the other main character.
L01: I do have a point of feed back for myself before I show it to anyone else for feedback: it takes to long to intoduce the creature character- which I have now called Draco. i have yet to take these boards into animatic stage but i am worried that too much of the story will be leading up to the main moment but, due to time constraints, the character will not have a long time to explore that moment before having to conclude the story.