LO1/7: I reviewed the new story boards with Dan and disuccsed the new story, informing him of the new character arch and premis of the narrative, which follows the theme of creation. While the new alterations were met with posative feedback there was still an issue of the main character interaction between the girl and Draco. The to and throw between them doesn't take place and the role of the feather used in the way that it is doesn't faciliate them meeting in the best way.
LO2: We discussed ideas of Draco chasing the girl on screen and dropping feathers as he goes and the feathers attract the girls attentions- allowing for her to interact with the feather and demonstrate to the audience the magical reaction between the girl and the feather- this still allows for the feather to be used to diffuse the high tention between the two characters.
I had the idea of Draco flying over the girl and landing in front of her to start the stand off. We also disucssed the idea of Draco being more curious rather than hostile so the girl gets scared but warms to Draco once she realises he is not a threat.
LO3: The sketches below explore these preminimary ideas which will be explored in new story boads.
LO2: We discussed ideas of Draco chasing the girl on screen and dropping feathers as he goes and the feathers attract the girls attentions- allowing for her to interact with the feather and demonstrate to the audience the magical reaction between the girl and the feather- this still allows for the feather to be used to diffuse the high tention between the two characters.
I had the idea of Draco flying over the girl and landing in front of her to start the stand off. We also disucssed the idea of Draco being more curious rather than hostile so the girl gets scared but warms to Draco once she realises he is not a threat.
LO3: The sketches below explore these preminimary ideas which will be explored in new story boads.