Amy's first animation test:
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Hi Amy
Thanks for sending the test over. It's a promising start a real improvement for the first tests you showed me.
But there are a few things that need improvement.
The animation goes off the screen- please try and keep the animation within the edges for the screen. For this shot it will be a case of moving where the moon is as that is the starting point of the animation.
Second, the line quality is far to rough. The lines need to be more solid and not so hairy. If this is just a rough animation then thats okay but for the final animation the line quality needs to be far cleaner.
The final pose is good but it feels as if the animation is not finished yet. I think a few more frames of her bringing her legs forward would give the movement more of a finished feel. Your doing good so keep going there!
There are other changes I would like to suggest but I can't do say via typed. If you could send me the file you are working on I can make some annotations and then send them back to you. May I also suggest that once I've made the notes, and sent the new folder to you, we have a Skype chat to discuss. Tomorrow is a good for me but let me know.
Great work so far,
Rebecca
My Feed back in email
Hi Amy
Thanks for sending the test over. It's a promising start a real improvement for the first tests you showed me.
But there are a few things that need improvement.
The animation goes off the screen- please try and keep the animation within the edges for the screen. For this shot it will be a case of moving where the moon is as that is the starting point of the animation.
Second, the line quality is far to rough. The lines need to be more solid and not so hairy. If this is just a rough animation then thats okay but for the final animation the line quality needs to be far cleaner.
The final pose is good but it feels as if the animation is not finished yet. I think a few more frames of her bringing her legs forward would give the movement more of a finished feel. Your doing good so keep going there!
There are other changes I would like to suggest but I can't do say via typed. If you could send me the file you are working on I can make some annotations and then send them back to you. May I also suggest that once I've made the notes, and sent the new folder to you, we have a Skype chat to discuss. Tomorrow is a good for me but let me know.
Great work so far,
Rebecca