The Aniamtion was well recived but there is room for improvemet.
The Animation:
Composition:
The Animation:
- Curved line: the character should be composed of curved line. avoid using straign lines as they creat sharp corners whcih look too aggressive for the character, for example the knee.
- Line Quality: I should use smaller line width. The lines were too chuncky and took away the delicate feel. She looked too solid which doesn't suit her character profile at this stage in the narrative.
- The moon transformation: It was macanically aniamted. I was very methodical in showing how she unrapped form the moon and for that reason it didn't look good. Next time I will have to animate more freely.
- Personally I am not please with the overall animation of the test. Compared to the one I pitched in october it is not as impactful. I will have to reconsider her posing, movement and timing. however it is progress.
Composition:
- Good colour: the colour pallet was liked very much. it is sedate but not boaring with works well as colour is very key in the narrative.
- the background should rotate slowly to make it look less flat and give it some life. apprently Goerge Lucas used that techique in Star Wars.
- Also add forground elements to make the aniamtion look like it's taking place in an enviroment.